Talking is easy,
Silent staring is hard.
Losing moments,
Staring into our lost past.
My eyes blush,
Reading his eyes smile.
Oh man!
Itβs been a long time.
Then I listen to my own heart,
Demanding dangerous things.
Like the devil inside me is overtaking,
And I might give in.
But I walk past the dream,
Just staring in those eyes.
And his eyes still remembering,
Of our whiskey times.
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Beautiful. I love your blushing eyes
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Haha thank you
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Well expressed. π
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Thank you π
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Hello, thank you for finding beauty in my words. I found it in yours and followed back. π
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Thank you π
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i saw a glimpse into your soul and it was good – life, what sweet pain
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Thank you for such a sweet comment. π
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I took an art class once in college. The instructor told me the difference between a good painting and a great painting is in the subtlety. According to her, “There are galaxies of nuance in how the shadows fall, and how the light bounces. The masters live in each of those galaxies, at least for a little while.” I dropped that class later that day and signed up for art history instead. But I have come to suspect that her advice applies to poetry as well. I also suspect you have a gift for conveying this kind of nuance. This is really good stuff here.
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Iβm glad you enjoyed it, it was really humbling to read you comment. Thank You
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Superb. Vivid and tested on the pulses. The couplet mode (well, in a way) works so well. And the touch of wry, dry humour is the pomegranite on top! – will
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And that leader image of Nameless Book is to dye for!
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Just beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you π
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I adore this piece! β€
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Thank you so much Susi
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You are very welcome! π
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Wow! Great piece! Thank you for following ThusNSuch.
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Thank you
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Beautiful poem leaving much a thought to ponder. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Thank you so much Anand
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This is so good!
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Thanks, glad you are liking it
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I always find the ending of a poem the hardest – you’ve done it well here – thanks for the follow and all the very best!
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Thank you so much
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Amazing!
I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger award, can’t wait to read your answers!π
You can check it out here – https://wordpress53370.wordpress.com/2018/12/28/sunshine-blogger-award-βπ»/
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Thank you so for the nomination. It means alot.
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I posted that twice, sorry for that!π
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